It’s time again for Kat Myrman’s wonderful challenge to tax our creative souls. Just take her photo prompt and write a story, inspired by it, in 140 characters or fewer.
Here is this week’s prompt and my contribution. Check out all the fabulous entries here.
Part two of the story from last week
They climbed up quickly.
I see her Dad! Just where we left her. Can we stay with Mum?
Forever! said Dad, quietly releasing the safety catch.
(139 characters)
Oh yes, very clever Peter. Hopefully you have a part three!
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Thank you. Depends on the prompt next week!
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Oh my…heartbreaking! But an excellent sequel to last week. I do remember saying I was wondering. 🤔
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Oh this is a smart idea to continue….BUT Peter!!!!! I do not know, if it is my mood today, but this sounds very dark devil..is he armed?
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He is, but what are his intentions?
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well, when it is forever, it is not so difficult…he will kill his wife, his kid and himself.
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Perhaps!
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That is not a foregone conclusion!
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is this the answer to my statement? Would be nice if not and the build-up of tension would be great if it turns to something good….when I´m reading this from you, I have these expectations……: )…but maybe you will surprise me!
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Yes indeed anie. If the next prompt does not allow a continuation then the story ends however you want it to!
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oh great, if it does not allow a continuation then I´ll write my end for your story…: )
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Nice! This is getting darker by the week 🙂
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Thank you Ali.
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Excellent and I will hope that we get another installment … I need to know where this is going – of course I can imagine, which is entirely the point of the exercise but I’m a nosey old bird too and always intrigued at the way different writers minds work 🙂
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Will he, won’t he? The choice is yours!
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Oh my…… okay, now I am waiting for next week too!!
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Whoa! So dark! Great writing, keep going!
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Thank you Meg.
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My pleasure!
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Wow Peter! Sad and mysterious
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Maybe sad, maybe not. You decide!
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Well, you know my opinion, yes? 🙂
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Intrigued! Running to read part 1. 😃
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